I jump in
I try to move fast
But I'm overcome with fear and fatigue
My body is aching
I try to rest
But I know I cannot
They say, "COME ON!"
I push will all my strength
I am finally on the other end
I
go
under........................................
Impressive work! I salute you
ReplyDelete------V
Cool poem
ReplyDelete- S
I seriously love the dramatic color changes. Nice creative changes.
ReplyDelete-Kayla
i enjoyed the deliberate pauses at the end of the poem
ReplyDelete-Janna
I appreciate it
ReplyDeleteI personally liked this poem, but how did you make your words blue at the end?
ReplyDelete-Princess
Highlight color
DeleteI love this poem. It reminds me of my first swim meet.
ReplyDelete-H.